
Journal Kragg's Journal: bad fiction 5
I posted a story over at Kuro5hin.
Knowing what the site is like it'll probably last about 5 minutes before being dumped, but if anyone wanted to offer constructive criticism, I'd be grateful...
I posted a story over at Kuro5hin.
Knowing what the site is like it'll probably last about 5 minutes before being dumped, but if anyone wanted to offer constructive criticism, I'd be grateful...
Surprise due today. Also the rent.
Read only? (Score:2)
Re:Read only? (Score:2)
Incidentally, don't vote it up unless you disagree with the editorial comments, I now think another round of editing and a resubmit would do it some good. But please do leave feedback.
Thanks.
Re:Read only? (Score:2)
Re:Read only? (Score:2)
I was honestly interested - I love short fiction stories =)
Re:Read only? (Score:2)
I'm going to polish it up a bit and then repost it, hopefully it will get through next time.